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More teenagers starting their own businesses
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Entrepreneurs
- I think the number of tennage entepreneurs in Japan will drastically increase. Actually it is increasing. I’m not sure if there are many tennage entrepreneurs or not, though. I think because the internet has developped, the way of working has been changing and a lot of new jobs hat old generation can’t think of have been created. Students can start their business at home with little money. That’s why teenage entrepreneurs are increasing.
- Parents should pay attention to their children to start a business. They lack experiences and they are too young for a business. They don’t think of any dangers expected. So parents should advise them in order to avoid them from danger.
- What characteristics should entrepreneurs have?Entrepreneurs need the power to keep on going and improve how to succeed. They should never give up even if they fail.Of course, they should be hardworking and intelligent and modest to listen to the words from others.
hardworking, intelligent, persistent, courageous, determination, to never quit
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You said: The coronavirus problem in Japan is bigger and bigger.
Correct: The coronavirus OUTBREAK is now BECOMING bigger and more serious in Japan.
